Sunday, November 2, 2008

class critique

hello all,
here is the logos from the "final logo critique"

I was quite confused, mainly because this was a bran new idea that really hadnt had a chance to be worked through.

During the critique i found that people didnt like the color, and the shape didnt really look like a brain.
I also got the feeling that the text and shape werent intergrated enough.

so, i started over... again.. :(







On the left are a mess of brainstorming that in the end i think actually worked in getting all my ideas out onto paper. It was a rigorous process, but i think it worked! yay

















Here is my final logo. Its an "Explosion" of science and communicates excitement. the line drawings give a nice texture and create a sense of investigation (which i believe kids will enjoy)

The shapes in the background actually do complete a square (just so u know where the shapes were made from-look above to one of the earlier versions)

let me know what you all think!! thanks

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